Wednesday, November 21, 2007

Breaking Through

This is my chance to escape
my fistful of tentions.
I dream of uncovering what is
beyond the garden of life.
My spirit will not settle
until it claims its freedom.
My mind will continue battling
and fighting the feeling that
this wish isn't as genuine
as I imagined.
This discovery shall beautify
and redifine the entire
course of my life.
Once I embark on this journey
there will be infinite possibilities.
My body will open up unleashing
the shadows of my past
that have been locked away
inside my endless thoughts.
The war in my mind will
continue before I depart.
Darkness versus light.
I will survive the agony
that is conquering me.
The day that the one
warming hand saves me
from the on comeing hazards
will be the day I finally emerge.

3 comments:

aaaa said...

beyond the garden of life
is my fav line
i love this poem alot

Chibi Kitsune said...

Thanks again hun.

Pieces Of Me said...

This is my chance to escape
my fistful of tentions.
I dream of uncovering what is
beyond the garden of life.
My spirit will not settle
until it claims its freedom.

^ i liked this whole beginning to best!^
but the whole thing was great as well!! great imagrey!!!!! love it!!!