Veins turn crimson at
the sight of a blade.
Hands tremble unable
to maintain control.
His pain is salvation
compaired to numbness.
A hard sigh is forced
out of compressed lungs.
Eyes well up as if to
spill the divine liquids
he wishes to feel
upon his cheeks.
Nothing falls,
but the cold hands
of the man.
2 comments:
Wow. I like the the line "His pains is salvation compaired to numbness" and I liked "eyes well up to spill liquids he wishes to feel" Overall I liked your peom.
dude...that was awsome...just wow... dang! i wish i coud come up with serious stuff like that! nope it's joks and other somewhat happy stuff. sometimes i can get serious....holy crap i'm a little bit like ryuichi! just with out the pink bunny!i noticed the aniime pictures, so what shows or series do you like?
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