Every breath I take means
I'm closer to my last.
I can't get away from this
darkness that eats my past.
Every path I make seems
to be destroyed.
I can't remember where's
the life I enjoyed?
Everyday that break's
never has a sun.
It all adds up I
only equal to one.
Everytime I fake to be
the one you knew.
I can't go back to that,
it's not up to you!
3 comments:
this is by far my fav poem
Thank you very much. =^-^=
I liked "every path I make seems to be destroyed", but the line after it seemed a bit weak. I liked it a lot, I loved the concept, just seems like the rhyme sceme got in the way a little.
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